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I’m kissing your neck,
Rubbing your back.
Are you relaxed?
She was only one girl.
Fake ones shouldn’t count..
You can do so much better.
As you cough and complain,
I’ll make you pancakes.
And the syrup will be
Extremely homemade.
Everything will fit into place,
Even the strawberry jam
I slung into your face.
So exactly at this moment,

I decide to adore you.
©2007-2009 ~denomicnightmare
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I got inspiration from my own random thoughts and my besties and some adorable guys.
Oh and also from my mum's delicious pancakes I know she'll make tomorrow morning.. :3 Yay!

Cuddling and hugging is great though, no?

- :heart: Ashley
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Very good, flows well. I like the idea, the title is alluring.

I do sorta like the last line. It's cute. :+favlove:

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Would your maker have opened your eyes if
he'd preferred them closed?
I adore it...It makes me feel.

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Bliss
haha, very nice :)

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I need a new one of these.
Thanks. :D

Yeah, I'm going to keep it, I think.

:]

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Use a smile as a noun and I think like a verb.
Thanks. :]]

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Use a smile as a noun and I think like a verb.
Thanks. :]

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Use a smile as a noun and I think like a verb.
It's so seductive in the most interesting way! haha

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tune in
turn on
turn off
drop in
dropout
switch on
switch off
and explode....
Thanksss. :]]
That's what I was aiming for, in a way. Haha.


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Use a smile as a noun and I think like a verb.
haha your welcome ^.^

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tune in
turn on
turn off
drop in
dropout
switch on
switch off
and explode....

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